Writing to Support Claims


 

Unit Overview

In this unit you will review the structure and key features of an argumentative essay. You will then write an argumentative text. Then, you will continue learning about Greek and Latin roots and affixes. You will also review figures of speech. Finally, you will finish reading the novel From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler by E.L. Konigsburg.

·       I can write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence. W.6.1

·       I can conduct short research projects to answer a question, drawing on several sources and refocusing the inquiry when appropriate. W.6.7

·       I can draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. W.6.9

·       I can develop and strengthen writing as needed by revising and editing. W.6.5.

 

Argument Writing Review

Argumentative writing expresses a writer's point of view-his or her thoughts, feelings, or beliefs about a topic. The writer first establishes a claim, the main idea, and then supports this claim by presenting reasons for it, as well relevant evidence, such as facts and details, to explain and support each reason.

Key Features of Argumentative Writing:

·       an introduction that gets readers interested in the topic and presents a claim

·       paragraphs that provide logically ordered reasons supported by evidence

·       linking words, phrases, and clauses that clearly connect the claim to reasons, and reasons to evidence

·       a conclusion that restates the claim and leaves readers with something to think about

 

Like an informational essay, an argumentative essay is divided into three sections, the introduction, body, and conclusion.

 

INTRODUCTION

Introduces the topic and clearly states your claim

 

A strong introduction grabs the readers’ attention and makes them want to read more. It should:

·       Begin with an attention-grabbing statement or question.

·       Introduce the topic by telling what your essay is in response to and offering an initial thought or reaction.

·       Explain the issue you will be writing about.

·       State your claim clearly so that readers understand your point of view.

 

BODY

Supports your claim with reasons and evidence

 

Each paragraph or section of the body should develop one reason that supports your claim. Remember to:

·       Present your reasons in a logical order, such as by order of importance. Start or end with the reason that seems strongest.

·       Support your reasons with evidence by including facts and details from the passages you have been given to read about the topics.

·       Connect ideas with linking words, phrases, and clauses to help them flow together smoothly- including introductory phrases for direct quotes and evidence.

 

CONCLUSION

Restates your claim and tells why it matters

A strong conclusion leaves readers with a good understanding of your point of view. You should:

·       Briefly restate your claim and summarize your reasons.

·       End with a strong statement that leaves your readers with something to think about.

 

 

Remember the steps of writing:

Step 1: Unpack Your Assignment

Step 2: Find Evidence

Step 3: Organize Your Evidence

Step 4: Draft Your Essay

Step 5: Revise and Edit for Conventions

 

In the previous unit, you read an example of an argumentative essay. Now it’s your turn to write an argumentative essay.

 

Step 1: Unpack Your Assignment

Prompt: Write a multi-paragraph response in which you make and support a claim about whether or not kids should be allowed to use their cell phones in school. Your response must be based on ideas and Information that can be found in the passages.

To prepare to write your essay, you will read the following sources:

 

Cellphones in schools: Does safety outweigh distraction?

 

More schools are allowing phones, so teachers use them for education

 

 

Step 2: Find Evidence

During this step you will reread the sources above in order to identify important details about the effects of social media in order to form your own claim. Use questions 1-7 to help you.

 


 

Step 3: Organize Your Evidence

For this assignment, you are going to use the following graphic organizer:

 

Either print out a copy here or create your own on a separate sheet of paper.

 


 

Step 4: Draft Your Essay

Remember, in the drafting stage of writing, you form all of your ideas into sentences and paragraphs. These paragraphs must be organized in a logical way, or readers might not understand what you are trying to communicate. In the argumentative essay, you will have an introduction, body, and conclusion. Remember the following example from the previous unit:

 

INTRODUCTION

 

attention grabbing statement or question

 

Introduce the topic

 

Explain the issue

 

State claim

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you like to play video games? If so, you're like a large portion of American teenagers who also play. Unfortunately, playing video games is negatively affecting your health. Players' have experienced inadequate sleep, pain in their wrist or neck, and obesity. Rest assured, if you don't play excessively, you should not experience these effects. However, the hard-core gamers out there are in for another story.

 

BODY

 

Reason that your claim is correct

 

Evidence in the form of facts and details from the passages that support your reason

 

Linking words, phrases, and clauses- including introductory phrases for quotes and evidence

 

According to research, players' have experienced pain in their wrists, neck, or elbow. According to source 1, most of these pains are caused by sitting in one position for multiple hours and by repeating the same movements. Gamers who take long breaks and engage in other activities are less likely to experience pain. Sometimes this pain doesn't affect those gamers after they stop playing. Ways to prevent this from even happening is to portion-size the amount of time that you play your video games. Source 2 explains that not enough players' actually get any physical exercise besides tapping a controller or clicking a mouse. If you add physical exercise along with gaming, there will be less tension on your joints.

 

Secondly, some players do not get enough sleep. Many players who do not have bedtimes (or don't follow them) tend to go to sleep after midnight. At first, this is all fun and games until you start feeling the side effects. Exhaustion, depression, obesity, and poor school performance are risks from inefficient sleep (source 2). Playing games until 1 a.m. without moving or stopping will change your body in the long term. Ways to prevent this is to set a bed-time and follow it. Putting a limit on video games is the first step to a healthier lifestyle.

 

Finally, we come to the last major effect on our bodies- obesity. Obesity is linked with excessive gaming. Source 1 explains that "People may choose video games over physical activity". Like I wrote above, gamers who don't move for hours on end are not getting any exercise. Obesity from video gaming can be prevented by adding some physical exercise, along with your gaming. Take a walk, clean the house, or play with your pets or siblings or friends. Of course, obesity is not only caused by excessive gaming, but playing games is one factor. For those of you who aren't physically active, I suggest adding exercising into your daily routine (and less gaming).

 

CONCLUSION

Restate claim

 

 

Something to think about/Why it matters

 

In conclusion, I think it's clear that video games have a significant effect on physical health. Excessive gaming can cause pain, lack of sleep, and obesity which can lead to more health problems. As for physical exercise, some games like Wil fit plus or Wil fit resort turns physical activity into games like yoga. Although video games CAN have a positive effect on us, it will not necessarily work for everyone. To summarize, limiting the time that you play video games will benefit your health in more ways than one.

 

 

 

 


 

Step 5: Revise and Edit for Conventions

Remember, revising is the writing stage where you look for ways to improve the focus, structure, ideas, and language. When revising, you will reread your essay to make sure all of the details fit under the topic of the paragraphs they are in; you will make sure to use a mix of long and short sentences; and you will be sure to include transitions to connect your ideas.

Editing your writing involves checking for correct grammar, spelling, punctuations, and capitalization.

Go ahead and revise and edit your essay using the following questions to guide you:

Revise:

Do I state my topic clearly?

Do I include enough facts, details, and examples to support my ideas?

Are all my details clearly related to the topic?

Did I include transitions and introductory phrases for quotes and evidence?

 

Transitions

Connection

Words and Phrases

Addition

additionally, also, as well as, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover

Cause and Effect

cause and as a result, because, consequently, due to, in order that, since

Comparison

in the same way, likewise, similarly

Contrast

although, but, even so, however, nevertheless, still, yet

Introductory Phrases for Quotes and Evidence

As stated in the text,

According to the text,

Based on the text,

The author states,

 

HINT: Print out a copy of your essay and use the editing marks to edit your paper. Even better, ask someone else to edit your paper with you.

Go ahead and edit your essay using the following questions to guide you:

Edit:

Are all of the words that begin a sentence capitalized?

Do I end every sentence with punctuation?

Did I spell everything correctly?

Did I indent every paragraph?

 

 

 


 

Word Study

·       I can use common, grade appropriate Greek and Latin affixes and roots as clues to the meaning of a word.

English words come from many languages, including Greek and Latin.

A root is a word part that usually can’t stand alone as a word. Sometimes one root is added to another root to make a word. Affixes are word parts such as prefixes and suffixes that are added to roots to make words. Knowing what affixes and roots mean can help you figure out the meanings of words. As you learn Greek and Latin roots and affixes, your vocabulary will grow.

During the course of this class, you will be learning Greek and Latin roots, prefixes, and suffixes- each unit a new one will be added to the chart below.

 

duct is a root that means “lead.” For example: conduct. Conduct means “to lead the performance of (musicians or singers).”

 

Prefix

Suffix

Root

Meaning

Examples

Additional Information

en-

em-

 

 

to cause to be/to put into or onto/ to go into or onto

encounter, enable, employ, embark, encircle

 

fore-

 

 

before/ earlier

foreword, forearm

 

de-

 

 

reduce down/ away from

defeat, deform, decrease

 

trans-

 

 

across/ change/ through

transformation, transportation, transfer

 

anti-

 

 

opposite/ against

antibiotic, antifreeze

 

di-

dia-

 

 

two/ through/ across

digraph, dialogue, diagonal

 

ex-

 

 

out of/ away from

extract, exhale, extend

 

auto-

 

 

self

autograph, automatic

 

in-

(il-, im-, ir-)

 

 

not

inability, impatient, irregular, illegal

il- used before roots beginning with l illegible

im- used before roots beginning with b, m, p immature, imbalance, impatient

ir- used before roots beginning with r irregular

in-

(il-, im-, ir-)

 

 

in/ on/ toward

infer, illustrate, improve, irrigate

same prefix usage is applied as above

bio-

 

 

life

biography, biology

 

mini-

 

 

small

miniature, minimum

from the Latin word miniature… modern generations shortened miniature to mini

micro-

 

 

small/ minute

microbiology, microscope

 

uni-

 

 

one/ single

unicorn, unicycle, uniform

 

 

-en

 

made of/ to make

wooden, dampen, tighten

 

 

-dom

 

condition of

boredom, freedom, kingdom

usually a noun

 

-ity

 

state of/ quality of

prosperity, equality

usually a noun

 

-al

-ial

 

related to/ characterized by

colonial, dental, betrayal

usually an adjective

 

-ion

-ation

-sion

-tion

 

act of/ state of/ result of

tension, attention, elevation, union

the real suffix is -ion putting s or t in front of -ion is simply determined by the spelling of the root; usually a noun

 

-ish

 

relating to/ characteristic

childish, foolish

usually an adjective

 

-ent

-ant

 

an action/ condition

student, immigrant, contestant

often a noun; the suffix -ant often indicates a person noun

 

-ent

-ant

 

causing a specific action

obedient, absorbent, abundant, elegant

often an adjective; -ent and -ant sound alike because of the schwa;

-ent is used more often

 

-hood

 

the state/ the condition/ the quality

boyhood, likelihood

usually a noun

 

 

aud

hear

audience, audible, audio

 

 

 

therm

heat

thermometer, thermal

 

 

 

aqua

water

aquarium, aquamarine

 

 

 

act

put in motion/ process of doing

action, react, transact

 

 

 

mit

to send

emit, transmit

 

 

 

duct

duc

lead

induce, conduct

 

 

Language Lesson: Relationships Between Words REVIEW

·       I can use the relationship between particular words (e.g., cause/effect, part/whole, item/category) to better understand each of the words. L6.5b

 

An analogy shows the relationship between two pairs of words.

Here is an example:

fast is to slow as up is to down

 

To understand this analogy, think about the relationship between fast and slow. Up and down are related in the same way. The words in each pair are antonyms.

There are different types of analogies. As you study the chart below, think about the relationship between the pairs of words.

 

Type of Analogy

Example

synonyms

small is to miniature as fast is to speedy

antonyms

young is to old as smooth is to rough

cause/effect

tired is to sleep as hungry is to eat

part/whole

finger is to hand as petal is to daisy

item/category

carrot is to vegetable as cherry is to fruit

 

 

Let’s Practice

 

 




 

Independent Reading

·       I can read and comprehend literature independently and proficiently. RL6.10

From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler by E.L. Konigsburg: Reading Assignment - Chapter 10

Read Chapter 10

 

Log your reading time in the Log Entry Question.